CLASS 12 ...... INVITATIONS and REPLIES Quick Revision
Attempt ANY ONE from A and B given below. 5
A You are Dr. Suchitra Mukherjee. You have received an invitation from the Director,
Health Services, Kharagpur, W.B, to preside over a gathering of leading medical
practitioners attending a workshop on mental wellness on 09 November, 2023 at 11
a.m. in the Public Hospital, Jammu, J & K. Respond to accept the invitation in about 50
words.
OR
B Draft an invitation in about 50 words, on behalf of your aunt, Meghna Menon, which she
has to share to invite prior work colleagues to the inaugural event of her own
investment consultancy firm, in the Acer mall, Kozhikode, Kera
2. INVITATION
Format – 1 mark Content -2 marks Organisation of ideas -1 Accuracy 1
2 A. Features:
Letter type -Formal reply
Acknowledge the invitation express gratefulness
Express thanks in third person (if someone else is replying for the invited / first person – if the invited is replying themselves)
Mention acceptance or regret- (give reason)
Use formal and polite language
The layout usually pertains to the format of a formal letter.
2 B. Features:
Card type-formal invite
a single-sentence presentation in third person / end line punctuations skipped
Use the simple present tense
answers the questions who, whom, when, where, what time and for what
includes name and address of the organiser /host and name/s of special invitees (if any)
No signatures
The layout usually pertains to the following--
Name of host /hosts
Formal standard expression-cordial
Purpose of invitation
Date /time of event
Venue (address)
Name of special guest (if any)
RSVP
Contact detail/ number
FORMAT – 1 mark
A. Reply to formal invite--- Letter type & B. Formal invite to many ---Card type
NOTE-full credit if all aspects included. Partial credit (½ mark) if one-two aspects are missing. No credit if more than two aspects are missing.
CONTENT – 2 marks
(As listed in value points) --- ½ mark *4=2 marks
ORGANISATION OF IDEAS -1 mark
1 mark -- Consistent to frequent display of the listed parameters.
Highly effective style capable of conveying the ideas convincingly with appropriate layout
[Reply to formal invite--- Letter type] & [Formal invite to many ---Card type]
Carefully structured content with organised information presented cohesively in an aligned manner.
Highly effective register (formal tone, tense, and vocabulary), relevant, lucid and appropriate
sentences for conveying the idea/s precisely and effectively.
½ mark – Limited display of listed parameters.
Inconsistent style, expression sometimes awkward, layout, barely accurate.
Poor sequencing of ideas; often sporadically clear and related to the given topic in an attempt to
maintain a general overall cohesion. Displays disjointed portions, exhibiting a lack of coherence of
ideas.
Range of vocabulary is limited but manages to convey, largely, the overall meaning and the purpose of
2.A You are Dr. Suchitra Mukherjee. You have received an invitation from the Director, Health Services,
Kharagpur, W.B, to preside over a gathering of leading medical practitioners attending a workshop on
mental wellness on 09 November, 2023 at 11 a.m. in the Public Hospital, Jammu, J & K. Respond to accept
the invitation.
Value Points
Reference to invitation
Acceptance of invitation
Confirmation of date, time and venue
Comment on looking forward to attending (if at all)
2.B Draft an invitation in about 50 words, on behalf of your aunt, Meghna Menon, which she has to share to
invite prior work colleagues to the inaugural event of her own investment consultancy firm, in the Acer mall,
Kozhikode, Kerala.
Value Points
Refer to Features, listed above.
the writing.
ACCURACY -1 mark
1 mark
Spelling, punctuation and grammar consistently/largely accurate, with occasional minor errors, that
do not impede communication.
½ mark
Spelling, punctuation and grammar display some errorsspread across, causing minor impedimentsto
the message communicated.
No credit
Frequent errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar, impeding communication.
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